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Mana these lovely lines are by 
I'm just coloring and replacing them!
MANANAMANAAANANANAMANANAAN
Anyway, I don't usually post WIPs anymore, but I'm starting to loose interest and I'm looking for some crits and comments to get me going again. Firstly and foremost I have a question.
IS THAT BEIGE ON THE JACKET? I'm bad at figuring out what Beige is x.x;
I'm just coloring and replacing them! MANANAMANAAANANANAMANANAAN
Anyway, I don't usually post WIPs anymore, but I'm starting to loose interest and I'm looking for some crits and comments to get me going again. Firstly and foremost I have a question.
IS THAT BEIGE ON THE JACKET? I'm bad at figuring out what Beige is x.x;
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I hope you haven't given up on this, it looks waaay too good so far for you to stop! D: <
The only crit I can think of giving at the moment is that the hair looks nice and detailed and straight, but it's almost too neat; the hair lineart is curly at the ends, and I think you need to make it more messy...if that makes any sense whatsoever
If it doesn't you can just ignore it :3
Looks wonderful so far though!!
The only crit I can think of giving at the moment is that the hair looks nice and detailed and straight, but it's almost too neat; the hair lineart is curly at the ends, and I think you need to make it more messy...if that makes any sense whatsoever
If it doesn't you can just ignore it :3Looks wonderful so far though!!