Anti-gravitational WIP

hahaha understands the title. I'm so eager to hurry with this, but I'm trying so hard NOT to hurry. Hurry bad.

I'm gonna scrap this one and put up a lineart just before I put up the finished project, but yah.

So what do you think? Did I clean up the lines okay? Are the corset and shirt better this way? or that? Shading doing alright? Should I make it more environmental, or leave it like a character sheet? Comments and suggestions and critiques most welcome people

Oh also, WHAT COLORS SHOULD I MAKE IT *dies*